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dah1namedj0na
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0 posted 2007-10-29 07:59 AM



A poem i wrote for a dear friend whose been heart broken and is still trying to move on, but occasionally has thoughts of that person.
Lucent Entity

A roaring monsoon engulfing all,
Is unrivaled by your gentle breeze.
Your luminescence calms my storms,
Your smile and presence is your own prestige

A rainbow is said to have no end,
Because no one can reach the gold that is you,
Although rainbows are only reflections of the sun,
Your essence is one I hold so true.

Replacing your heart now lays a burden
One that all find so trivial
And although it’s painful to see you in agony,
You always manage to look so adorable.

Just know although you feel distressed,
It's your existence that makes me feel so blessed.


© Copyright 2007 John H. Nguyen - All Rights Reserved
hunnie_girl
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1 posted 2007-10-30 01:48 AM


A rainbow is said to have no end,
Because no one can reach the gold that is you,~
How true, I haven't seen you here for awhile. good to have you back. I liked this poem. I hope to read more soon
Krysti

dah1namedj0na
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2 posted 2007-10-30 08:09 AM


oh thanks a lot xD i've been in Alaska with my family for a few months on this expedition haha


Artic Wind
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3 posted 2007-11-12 09:58 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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