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LOSTinTHISworld
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0 posted 2007-10-07 03:52 AM


there seems...
to be an infection...
in the wounds...
you have caused me...
its red and its swelling...
there is bruising...
all around me



{in a million years i wont be over you}

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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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1 posted 2007-10-07 08:25 AM


i usually don't like such short poems, but i liked this one.

-Red

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

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2 posted 2007-10-07 01:51 PM


Love this...
Krysti

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