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surf_painter
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0 posted 2007-09-16 10:29 PM


Sheer desperation
Seems to claim my heart
While I wait for you
To take me
For my rightful part
Beside your side
In regal attire
Before ourlands
Are ravished by fire

Soon I will leave
With nerves of steel
To take my place
For I do not feel
The pain
That comes and goes
With my conscious mind

Nerves are all I have
I face this monster
On my own I will be
Excitement is not the word I use
For me going to this place


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hunnie_girl
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1 posted 2007-09-17 01:00 AM


wow this was really good I loved it. life is a journey enjoy your ride
Krysti

[This message has been edited by hunnie_girl (09-17-2007 03:01 PM).]

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