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Teen Poetry #8

Where I've been

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

0 posted 2007-09-15 08:43 PM

You take me places I never thought i'd go
you see feeling I never thought i'd dhow
and sitting next to you in your pickup truck
I know i'm your girl definately my luck

you look at me with a smile on your face
you give me feelings I can never replace
and being next to you awake in your arms
lights me on fire and sounds my alarms

slowly you advance making sure I'm alright
I've waited all my life to be with you tonight
we went here and there the whole night through
and now that you're not here i'm dying without you

Even though I only see you on the weekends
we make memories that we tell all our friends
about all the places we've ever seen
from all the sights you've taken me

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

1 posted 2007-09-15 10:41 PM

incredible o.o can someone say "talent"????

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

2 posted 2007-09-16 05:03 PM

it's lovely Krysti. just make sure you're being smart. love your stuff.

-Kate

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

3 posted 2007-09-16 10:24 PM

you are so talented this was another fav of min wonderful

Abbeon
Member

since 2006-11-30

Posts 228
Curiousity, and wonder

4 posted 2007-09-26 03:03 PM

Krysti you, you are so talented i love you work and i missed you hope to see you soon. Your writting is the best thing ive read well mostly.

Abbeon

Sexy_Tator_Tot
Junior Member

since 2007-08-31

Posts 42
Arkansas

5 posted 2007-10-01 11:19 AM

Thank you for commenting....I'm returning the favor....This is very good. I like it, short and to the point. Cant wait to read more.

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