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0 posted 2007-08-18 08:31 PM


Can I be your butterfly?
When life gets rough
Can I help you get by?
Will you smile
If you stop a while
To watch me as I fly?

Can I be your butterfly
Wings the color of prettiest blue?
I’ll ask God for all the happiness in the world
Just so I can give it to you.

Can I be your butterfly
Angel in disguise?
Can I be your butterfly
Bring so much joy
Yet be so small in size?

Well, if I can be your butterfly
Will you be my sky?
We’ll watch life in awe and wonder
And stay so high, high, high…

© Copyright 2007 Cierra L. Robbeloth - All Rights Reserved
Yogurt
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1 posted 2007-08-18 08:53 PM


Thats a beautiful poem your really good
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2 posted 2007-08-19 01:10 AM


yes. This was truly amazing so sweet
Krysti

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Jess
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3 posted 2007-08-19 03:23 AM


It really is very pretty. I think you should try to turn it into a song.
EmilySian
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4 posted 2007-08-19 01:39 PM


Really beautiful, and pretty!
BrittanyJ
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5 posted 2007-08-19 04:27 PM


Absolutly stunning!! I loved this

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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6 posted 2007-08-19 04:58 PM


vundurbar

-Red

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

Clockwork_Orange
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7 posted 2007-08-19 06:17 PM


i absolutly loved this piece. it was very well written. great jobs!
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