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Teen Poetry #8
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jmm3373
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since 2007-08-15
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0 posted 2007-08-15 10:46 AM



Her face is like morning her soul is the sun, she’s hard to get but you know she’s the one

She is their for the taking, but still your hearts breaking, and you know that its never gonna be.

  The reason you love her is still so unclear, for long you’ve been waiting it’s  almost a year, and then you know its never gonna be.

For years you regret what didn’t happen from the start, her face is fading but the love’s still in you heart. And you know it’s never gonna be.

You figure by now she’s forgot , about you and the way you  never could say the words i love you and that’s why it never was.


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musicgirl3698
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since 2007-08-16
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1 posted 2007-08-16 09:17 AM


This is a great poem jmm, I could feel that you spoke from the heart. You sound so promising! I would love to hear from you again.
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