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Teen Poetry #8

Rain in the Offing

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

0 posted 2007-08-14 10:57 AM

Rain in the Offing

I wait for the moonlight
Layered in rain
And oh the swing’s height
Driving me insane

My ring initialed CTR
Reminds me of how to behave
And my eyes search far
For the advances I crave

I’m waiting for you
It’s harder than you’d believe
Nothing seems true
So thus these lies I cleave

Irony tempting the boiling air
Places where all is silence
Regret runs rampant, free unfair
Never dares near recompense

I end up where I initially began
With hardly more than a dime
From this place I have ran
Into the eternal folds of time

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

1 posted 2007-08-14 06:11 PM

"Irony tempting the boiling air
Places where all is silence
Regret runs rampant, free unfair
Never dares near recompense"

Probably my favourite part. Loved it!

Rerra

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

2 posted 2007-08-14 09:51 PM

"I end up where I initially began
With hardly more than a dime
From this place I have ran
Into the eternal folds of time"

Amazing red

I luved this!!

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

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