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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

0 posted 2007-08-11 11:34 AM

Depths of Demise

I miss your words
And how you spake to me
The jokes we shared
Are nothing without you now

There’s one moment in time
Where no words seem to rhyme
There’s a day in the space of hours
Where every moment’s ours

There’s a point where you die
And moments that I cry
And the nights that melt into
Dreams you’re sent to

And you bleed in the morning
From the scars of night scorning
And dream in the daylight
Of the night’s awful fright

And my hearts harsh whisper
Of the moments I’ve lost
Are turning to Siren calls
That lure my to the depths of demise

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2007-08-12 02:24 AM

oh Red this is amazing. I really like this one.
Krysti

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

2 posted 2007-08-12 09:31 AM

thanks Krysti, i combinded one poem i was working on years ago with the last and first lines of this one, so the last and first lines are from now and the middle is from years ago. i felt it should get out there and i couldn't think of any better way to do it.

-Kate

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

3 posted 2007-08-12 12:24 PM

I liked this a whole lot red!! It had a lot of emotion

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

littlefairy
Member

since 2007-08-06

Posts 51
New York

4 posted 2007-08-12 01:30 PM

"And my hearts harsh whisper
Of the moments I’ve lost
Are turning to Siren calls
That lure my to the depths of demise" I loved that the most. It was a good poem. -Tara

I’m good during the day. But at night I wait.I wait for the one who’ll never return.

pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

5 posted 2007-08-14 06:13 PM

"There’s one moment in time
Where no words seem to rhyme
There’s a day in the space of hours
Where every moment’s ours"

I think this is my favourite from you. Loved it!!! Going in my library.

Rerra

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