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Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

0 posted 2007-07-31 03:40 PM

if i could take back all these things
that make me want to bleed
would it let me breath
would it let me see you smile at me

cant the words just kill the pain
like your heartbeat in the airwaves
the sound brakes your highest spirit
id say i love if you could hear it
id drown the sun and kill the tide
the stars would tremble and recognize
im falling through on you

can you please make me believe
in what you said to me
because im losing faith and falling fast
these feelings never last

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

1 posted 2007-07-31 08:54 PM

"because im losing faith and falling fast
these feelings never last"

Amazing, as always

I really liked this CO.

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2007-07-31 11:04 PM

beautiful. I really liked this.. well all your poems

hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

WaterFairy103
Member

since 2006-05-31

Posts 196

3 posted 2007-08-01 12:28 PM

Wow, another absolutely amazing one!

Life's not about the amount of breaths you take. It's about knowing the right time to inhale, the right time to hold your breath, and the right time t

broken_smile1469
Member

since 2006-07-02

Posts 104

4 posted 2007-08-02 08:21 PM

I liked it, it was really good! great job

"in a world of cheerios, be a fruit loop"

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

5 posted 2007-08-06 11:20 AM

that was beautiful. you know, i hope i marry someone poetic, so he can say sweet things like that to me.

this was my favorite part-

cant the words just kill the pain
like your heartbeat in the airwaves

-Red

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

6 posted 2007-08-06 11:39 PM

I know u wanted me to read this.. and it brings me to tears.. I can't say anything atm... but yea I'm Sorry

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

7 posted 2007-08-07 11:05 AM

its okay i dont blame you.i just thought you should read this.

and thanks to all the others who commented it means alot on this piece. ¢¾

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