Teen Poetry #8 |
The Circle Of Life |
mgoodman1989 Member
since 2006-03-05
Posts 93Iowa, USA |
Baby Insistant Restless Teething Hungry Clever Helpless Illtempored Laughter Discipline Testy Eager Empty Naughty Angry Greedy Entertaining Ready Alcohol Danger Unhappy Labor Trustworthy Decaying End Awful Terrible Helpless *I love him oh yes I do, he's for me and not for you, and if by chance you take my place, I'll take my fist and smash your face!* |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
i like it |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Hey, Long time no see mgoodman! I liked this one a lot, too me a minute to catch on because I'm an idiot but awesome setup. I liked how when you switched from one cycle to another the words were really meant for that "stage" of life. Thanks for sharing! "The rising morning can't insure that we shall end the day; For death stands ready at the door to snatch our lives away" |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
I loved this circle of life thing so very... true Krysti |
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