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hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

0 posted 2007-07-26 04:21 PM

I never say the right things to you,
that could melt your heart in two,
I never give off the right actions,
that would deepen your attraction,
    But Still...
You love me like nothing i've ever felt,
you say the right things and make my heart melt,
you make me feel like i am easy to love,
but I think that's what i'm most scared of,
    And Still...
I say the dumbest thing to you,
I know you're too good to be true,
I bounce around and fall flat on my face,
I never seem to walk the right pace,
    Still,
With you loveing me I feel so strong,
and I realize I wasn't that bad all along,
we don't need to talk or follow the drill,
we just need to love always, still

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2007-07-26 04:42 PM

love the sentiments of this...very sweet!

buttercupbaby
Member

since 2006-05-03

Posts 400
outside in the rain

2 posted 2007-07-26 04:53 PM

this is really sweet an cute, an you kept the rhyme flow up the whole time.. still.. i think some of the rhyme might be a little forced..
But who am i to talk, haa. I love your work, as usual :]]

~missy
<font size=1 color=pink style=verdana>afraid of my feelings and falling too deep, but i had to let go of the pain let it rain down on me

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

3 posted 2007-07-26 08:31 PM

Amazing hunnie! Absolutly amazing, as usual

It was so sweet. Can't wait for the next one!!

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

luvnh8rbalanced
New Member

since 2007-06-26

Posts 6

4 posted 2007-07-27 01:12 PM

i liked the emotion, it was really cute and happy.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

5 posted 2007-07-27 08:13 PM

thank you all for the nice replies

hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

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