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Teen Poetry #8

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Yogurt
Junior Member

since 2007-07-20

Posts 18
Canada

0 posted 2007-07-25 03:00 PM

Why does the world cry tears of acide
that burn into her heart

Which slowly makes her heart fall to ashes
then she can't love but can she hurt?

Can her tears rebuild her heart
or, or will she fade away

A time to kill, and a time to heal;
A time to break down, and a time to build up;
A time to weep, and a time to laugh;
A time to mourn

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

1 posted 2007-07-25 03:42 PM

"Can her tears rebuild her heart
or, or will she fade away"

This was my favorite line

Nice job.

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

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