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Sarena
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since 2007-07-24
Posts 1
Iowa, U.S.A.

0 posted 2007-07-24 11:22 AM


Run thats all,thats it,
you told me

running will make you feel
stress free

run I said thats all it takes,
running is such a big mistake

run, you said, won't get in trouble I
swear
run away from there

I watched you run,then I did too
don't know why seemed like the cool thing to
do

run, I told myself I'll be just fine,
so I started running away all the time

I became addicted, I need to runaway a few more times, I told myself won't do any harm

but then one day my mom snitched

what are you doing, why'd you leave, where'd you go

these are the questions that she said,
as all the memories rushed through my head

I got help and now I'm better
so I wrote you this letter

when I got home I asked where you were
she never got help mom said

something terrible happened to her

running thats all, thats it, you said
you almost wound up dead

I know running is all it takes
but running is a HUGE mistake!

Rena Roo

© Copyright 2007 Sarena Mae - All Rights Reserved
Yogurt
Junior Member
since 2007-07-20
Posts 18
Canada
1 posted 2007-07-24 12:41 PM


Omg I love it
Is it about you runnning away because i can relate

A time to kill, and a time to heal;
A time to break down, and a time to build up;
A time to weep, and a time to laugh;
A time to mourn, and a time

hunnie_girl
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since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567
Canada
2 posted 2007-07-24 04:14 PM


woah this was so I don't know vivid I understood it really well. Welcome to Passions:0
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

BrittanyJ
Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461
Come find me?
3 posted 2007-07-24 08:59 PM


I can't tell you how many times that i have thought the same thing. But it won't solve any problems. It makes them go away for a while, but they always come back. Wonderful poem And welcome to pip.

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620
Space Camp, IN
4 posted 2007-07-24 09:48 PM


well let me just say..."a very astonishing entrence into piptalk" i loved it
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