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Teen Poetry #8

Dying Amber

Tinsel
Junior Member

since 2007-06-04

Posts 36
UK

0 posted 2007-07-21 08:42 AM

I've been here a million times before,
It's no deja vu,
Just a barren night,
Made orange by street lamps.
I'm too young to sing the blues,
My pain is amber instead,
A lonely dimming fire.
Silence pours, ready to extinguish,
But I hold on,
Waiting
Waiting
Waiting for that one day,
When someone cares just enough,
To throw on a little kindling.

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

1 posted 2007-07-21 11:20 AM

Ouch...been there before

A painful poem, but written oh so well.

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

2 posted 2007-07-21 08:27 PM

i found it a bit disjointed through out most of it but i think the idea is right there just lying in hiding

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