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*wishfull*thinking* Junior Member
since 2006-09-03
Posts 33north east of england |
some words written like landscape over pages. next, nights we hated each other. what to say. if you love me you'll stand under streetlamps with a bleeding heart, rescue my flower dress shedding plum blossoms without responsibility; so much resting upon the i love you as the bow does the arrow, making affection beyond the withering in the desert like a geographical kiss. it's wonderful possessing no secret part, sitting with my forehead against the sunset while you pour yourself forth— God, get out of here! wait: that's what i want to do— confide serious things— except everyone's serious but you. how can i believe what you say when you lie to me while reading the story in bed thinking i’ll know no better? when i sing a song all out of tune and you say i have a lovely singing voice? or when i whisper a short lecture on french poetics and you dim the lights? when my eyes don’t lose you in the dark—i just don’t care to search and find your face? I'm miles from where you are, I lay down on the cold gound, I pray that something picks me up, And sets me down in your warm arms |
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Tempest Member
since 2006-04-28
Posts 247dont eat paint chips!!!! |
its a little bit hard to follow but i could manage and it was awsome. |
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*wishfull*thinking* Junior Member
since 2006-09-03
Posts 33north east of england |
glad you liked it i thought people would be rather negative on how i setted it out lol I'm miles from where you are, |
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