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BrittanyJ
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Come find me?

0 posted 2007-07-15 09:32 PM



i'm reaching for you
but you're not reaching back;
i wish i could change your mind.
i need you here
but i guess you don't care;
and i'm running out of time.

i don't want to seem
like i'm fading away;
but i must admit that i am.
please don't go
i don't want to fall;
just reach for me if you can.

i need to let go
you just want to leave;
but it's tearing me apart.
i don't know how much
of this i can take;
i guess i'm only losing my heart.

could you maybe pull me up
don't let me fade;
that's all i'll ever ask.
i'm still reaching for you
but you just won't reach back;
i guess it's too much of a task.

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

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1 posted 2007-07-17 07:59 PM


wow I really like this it was like woah
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

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