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Dying from Conformity
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Dying from Conformity |
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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513
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Look at me Suffering insanity Look at you Faking to relate You look as though you've gone insane But I see it in your eyes, I know You've just jumped on the insanity train Wanting to be different But most everyone's insane You're playing the wrong game Look at me suffering insanity Look at you Dying From Conformity |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
ohhh so many people are like that I really loved this. hunnie. ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Heh. We’re dying from conformity by conforming to the fad of writing about our horrible conformity! lolzz... Sorry, I just had to comment on the title and the ending being very confomity-ish. This was an interesting write, a little confusing to me because you’re jumping back and forth between insanity, you vs. them, trains vs. conforming, it's enough to make a persons head spin… but it wasn’t what I was expecting which was rather refreshing. All in all, interesting write, I enjoyed reading your poem. Thanks for posting; it was nice reading one of your pieces again  "The rising morning can't insure that we shall end the day; For death stands ready at the door to snatch our lives away" @-->--- |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
Look at me Suffering insanity Look at you Faking to relate loved this part. it was the best. that and the end, nice way to start and finish. -Red "I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow |
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