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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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0 posted 2007-07-10 08:19 PM



Dangerous Intentions – Part I

Watching . . . waiting . . .
Yet she hasn’t made her move
The busy little girl with the honey hair
Sacred of my face in her tree’s groove

Walking alone and looking behind
Somehow she knows of me
I don’t want her to
I don’t even know how that could be

I almost feel sorry
There’s really nothing she can do
But what will eventually happen
Is surly something she can work through

Sometimes I wonder what she’s thinking
But I will likely never know
What I’m planning is so awful
Her worst nightmare falls, scale-wise, low

It will ruin her every perfect plan
A future of great things shattered
Maybe it’s fear that she harbors
Not that it has truthfully mattered

She’s such a mystery
Beyond my comprehension
I love her I know it
But she yields none of her attention

If only she knew of my plans
She would hate me ‘til her end
But maybe my love is selfish
And I’d only play pretend

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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1 posted 2007-07-10 09:53 PM


ps you guys i haven't decided how many parts there are yet- but this just wasn't finished and i didn't want to make it incredibly long, and it wasn't finished, and honestly my imagination was pretty spent tonight; so i will update more parts hopefully ya'll be looking for them

-Red

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

BrittanyJ
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2 posted 2007-07-11 05:19 PM


Now i want to know what his intentions are...nicely done I really liked it. I can't wait to read the next one.

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

hunnie_girl
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3 posted 2007-07-12 01:02 AM


woah I like this a lot I can't wait to read part 2
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

surf_painter
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4 posted 2007-07-18 01:40 PM


good start to your trilogy of poems i can't wait to read the others
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