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Richy
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since 2003-05-03
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0 posted 2009-02-15 08:36 PM




The savor
of your
hunger rhymes,
linger,
in transcendent
detections,

wafting delicious,
and intrinsic,
in balmy,
and exotic.

As your verses,
bear your fragrance,
upon me,
the estrus,
of your carnality,
filling me,
intoxicated,

within these odes
of you,
of your evocative,
and solicit.


You,

are my favorite
word.

In your eyes
hieroglyphic,
began alphabet,
for me,

and, sonettos,
of syllables.

Your lips,
two Iliad’s
luscious,
pulsating,
swollen,
with a thousand
multitudes.

Your mouth,
an odyssey
in itself,
filled with,
semantics,
and venus,

engaged in
twists
of tongue,
and paragraphs,
of paramour.

Hold firm
the dictionary
of libidinous
between your
columns,
as you taste
of punctuation,
upon your skin,

our juxtaposition
of yearn
and sigh,
a cacophony
of trill,
and assonance.

Create
with me,
our rhythm
in rhyme,

in waves
impale
and salts,

of time.

Where windnotes
of rhapsody
braid your tresses
into tangles,

and the flavorsome
sounds
of nightsong
and chaste,
become you,

and unto me,
as my,
sustenance.

Come forth,
and scale
my geography,

where my
northern peak
supports,

your southern
savannah,

and both
titillating terrains,
erogenic.

Pound down
the pillar
of your achievement
in me,
as I fabricate
your form
and submission,

until eyes
rolled
and behold
the unforgiven,
of rule
and abstinence,

as the taste
of gasp
and spasm
linger,
on your beam.

Let me
design you
with blueprint,

as I
paint the walls
of your interior

with valentine,
and vibrant,
generosity.

Your ample frame
anchored,
and surmounted
by stud,
and plaster.

Your foundation
filled,
with soundness
and memory.

Let me
tongue trace
a heart
on your lips

as it pierces you,
like a serpent
of thought
through the
moistness,
of your muse,

with surfeit seam
and boldness
in between
as your taste,
trembles
with mine,

while I sunder
your separation,
with protrusion.

Like the polished
hard stone,
my ardor
tumbles,
down the river

toward you,

awash in
sweetened brine
and purity,

it meanders,
through solitude
and eon,

making its way
to the ocean,
of your cleft.

Your touch,
so new to me,
like morning,

as your body
molds itself
about fingers,
and breath,

the lushness
of your vista
splayed out,
in its
vulnerability,
and seclusion.

Let moon breeze
carry my songs
of humility
to you,

of melodies
not yet
whispered,
to the hunger,
of your neck,
impregnated,
with the
sweat of thirst.

As I wait
to show the feel
of my,
high esteem
for you.

Thank you,

for the lessons
taught.

To know dying,
that I never really
knew,
anything,

until us.


And for
the gift
of belief,
once more.

Especially,

in someone,
like you.



[This message has been edited by Richy (02-16-2009 04:29 AM).]

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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2009-02-16 03:02 AM


"thud" .... .... these words were like rapids, dear Richy, or like having sipped a flut of champagne that makes one unsteady ...
then here I am now looking out of the window and the sun is high already. But wasn't it midnight just now?
Gosh, you are one of a kind, dear romantic Richy!
Love,
Margherita

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2009-02-16 01:34 PM


Rich, it was "Especially" nice of you to write this for and about, me! ~ Ya, right! In my dreams! Whew, man, you sure know how to give this gal the vapors!!!

I suppose you know the icon that is about to follow ~ Yeppers! It's ~ I'm so predictable!


Linda


inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
3 posted 2009-02-16 05:37 PM


you are a charmer of words making them rise from the page into the readers theatre
of mind and heart..

Suncleaver
Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481
Stafford England
4 posted 2009-02-16 06:31 PM


I'm dumbfounded Richy.

This is spectacular.

Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told.

Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
5 posted 2009-02-16 08:28 PM


Richy....Amazing word forplay.  
Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
6 posted 2009-02-16 08:43 PM


Richy - your command of the English language is most amazing. I'm in awe of your talent...

BC

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia
7 posted 2009-02-16 10:47 PM


Such a romantic tasty treat

Hope

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