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Open Poetry #44

The Golden Sun

drdyllyo
New Member

since 2009-02-12

Posts 3
WI, USA

0 posted 2009-02-12 04:47 PM

The golden sun rises anew,
sets ablaze the morning dew.
The fauna welcomes the celestial light,
daffodils blowing: behold the sight!

The Lord bestows a wondrous view,
which is seen by an enlightened few,
but blindly passed by ignorant men,
hearing the calls of twenties and tens,
migrating at nine and three,
ignoring the beauty, so easy to see.

A child was playing, but now did yield,
here he sits alone in the field,
listening to the robin's song,
the innocence of men all but gone.
This child retains innocence yet,
as the red sun begins to set.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2009-02-12 05:29 PM

May the number of those who SEE increase steadily!

This is well written, I enjoyed it.

Love,
Margherita

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