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Alison
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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

0 posted 2009-02-11 03:23 AM


In silent darkness
a blossom shares glimpses of
a beautiful mind


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Alison

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2009-02-11 09:09 AM


You made me go on a hunt.

Lovely, sweetheart. Just wonderful!


Anniepimm
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2 posted 2009-02-11 09:34 AM


I have always been a fan of the short and sweet
And i love this one..

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3 posted 2009-02-11 09:38 AM


Ali Blossom ~

Your mind is a beautiful thing ~ be it in the still of the night or in the rays of a sunny day!

Love ya!
Linda

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4 posted 2009-02-11 09:52 AM


Yo dear Alison,

I think superheroines are cool.

Bobby

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5 posted 2009-02-11 11:34 AM


Lovely, Alison!  I enjoyed the quiet harmony of this.

Owl

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Divine!

Love,
Margherita

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7 posted 2009-02-11 12:38 PM


enjoyed
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8 posted 2009-02-11 02:03 PM


Yes, indeed, dear Alison and in the silent darkness of sleep I believe we too do just that.  Lovely!

Helen

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9 posted 2009-02-11 03:49 PM


I also love the short poem that is long on meaning---this one has depth and beauty!

Best wishes, Alison-

art

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10 posted 2009-02-11 05:49 PM


a 'write' most fine!

MUCH applause!!

Alison
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11 posted 2009-02-13 02:33 AM


Sunshiney One,

Thank you. Was the hunt a success?  I love that you liked this one.

Alison

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Hi Annie,

Short and sweet is good too.  Thank you for reading and commenting.

Alison

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Loverly Linda,

Thank you, beautiful one.  You are a delight to my day.

Alison

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Bobby,

I think that you just might be right!

Alison

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Thank you, Diana - for feeling the harmony of it and for being you.

Love,
Alison

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Margherita,

You make me happy.

Love,
Alison

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Vandana,

Thank you.

Alison

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Helen,

Exactly!  I think so too.

Alison

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Art

Thank you for taking the time to read and understand.

Alison

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Bruce,

You make me smile so often with the generosity of your responses.

Alison


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12 posted 2009-02-17 09:43 AM


I did indeed go on a hunt
but it hasn't sprung spring yet...

and I liked this enough
to come back and read it again.


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13 posted 2009-02-17 10:56 AM


A beautiful haiku, Alison, short and sweet Mark
Alison
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14 posted 2009-02-17 06:21 PM


Sunshine,

Thank you for stopping back.  Next time, let's have a cup of tea and visit.  

Alison

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Mark,

Thanks - I love sweet and short too (kinda sometimes anyway).

A

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15 posted 2009-02-19 08:15 AM


Yes, it does, doesn't it.
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16 posted 2009-02-19 03:02 PM


Wonderful reasoning.

Very clever.

Eric

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