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Dark Stranger
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West Coast

0 posted 2009-02-09 08:15 AM



perhaps it was the waterfall of our thoughts
or the one kiss too many afternoon
when the ocean was hiding in the rain
but we were both wet enough with our eyes

or perhaps it was the laughter places
we tiptoed around sometimes
when we listened to each others voices
small talking around the want to music

or a walk through the valley of lady tree
when the onlookers were just drive bys
when we realized our shadows were touching
and we stepped from the innocent of palms

into the weaved fingerings of forbidden
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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2009-02-09 08:27 AM


Oh, you step out of the circle of palms to enter the forbidden terrain? To judge from this awesome, uniquely creative work, you treat "forbidden" with incredible attractiveness.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Raindance
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since 2009-02-07
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West Coast
2 posted 2009-02-09 09:15 AM


I enjoyed this alluring dance...
Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2009-02-09 09:32 AM


ms mar, thanks lady !!  you make me smile


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raindance, thank you so very much and welcome to the bluezoo of pip

suthern
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4 posted 2009-02-09 01:24 PM


You just keep getting better and better!!
Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2009-02-09 01:54 PM


ms suthern..now you are blushing me..thanks lady
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