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Patient Forms |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Patient Forms Colors lay upon the clouds in grateful stratus Levitations born to dream somewhat non-gratis Form the whispers of a genuflecting morning Melting ice and frozen wishes softly storming It is true the seasons change by their appearance Keeping step of spirit will, by their adherence Though for me each morning brings a new enchantment Moving forth my heart and soul with each advancement Come then what may, as seen in fact, and fancy playing The welcome sight of trees spread high, in honor swaying For not a mortal, by man handled speculation Could be brought the halt of thought or consecration Colors lay in change upon the open coffer Gold and silver meld to liquid in their offer Spilled in crystal shimmer tears, the skies afford them Every glance, but just the chance, to now adorn them Then looking out across the vast of change redeeming So set my eyes across the skies of layers streaming Copyright Kkh 2/7/09 |
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DharkOne Junior Member
since 2009-01-28
Posts 31 |
I really like what was written here, but the monotonous rhyme scheme seriously detracts from an otherwise excellent write. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Though for me each morning brings a new enchantment Moving forth my heart and soul with each advancement There is always something new on the palette, on your palette in the gifts of the new morning. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: As always you succeed in creating excellence, dear Kathleen. Love, Margherita |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
TD...the imagery you make into art, the poetic intent and the excellence in form, make your poetry so special...always! |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"Spilled in crystal shimmer tears, the skies afford them" nice line...beautiful write...well done |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
"Spilled in crystal shimmer tears, the skies afford them Every glance, but just the chance, to now adorn them Then looking out across the vast of change redeeming So set my eyes across the skies of layers streaming" Fine writing indeed! Eric |
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