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Winter Fellowship
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Winter Fellowship |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Winter Fellowship a blackbird long-shadow ripples over new-fallen snow on barren fields just before sunset a wild winter wind follows in footsteps of the storm this trackless forest becomes an empty universe for inconsolate souls comfort, harmony, and true purpose… remain elusive --- b. e. adams (2/6/2009) |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
secondhanddreampoet - you write some really nice poems about winter, this being one of them... BC |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This has such a lonely. cold feeling about it and yet it is as beautiful as new snow. Ida |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Secondhanddreampoet, I like your "a blackbird long-shadow" line. Bobby |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
The existential dilemma---to observe the appearance of beauty and harmony, then to see meaning. This is what it says for me in a quiet, melancholy way. art |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Nicely done in such versimilitude to all aspects of life. Open ended meanings bring the points all the way home. Eric |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I love to see rippling shadows on the ice and snow. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Bruce, I declare you Winter's Poet Laureate! Owl |
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