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She Said............Hello
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She Said............Hello |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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She Said............Hello It was an incredible first word a beginning and a promise blended into a breath becoming a given pledge the creation of paradise on earth a coming home a warmth an opening invitation to forever the creation of paradise on earth and like the sound of angels wings like spirits of old welcoming new a pronouncement of the heart pressed soft to the ear of the receiver the creation of paradise on earth all she bestowed was the whisper of eternal sun a sanctuary for the soul endless journeys into night promises never to be forgotten yes, it was an incredible first word. (c) KRJ 5-8-03 |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Karilea, I just got tingly goosebumples all over me! Last evening, I was telling someone about when my dear, dear friend and I met over 27 years ago. She walked in my front door and said, "Hello. I'm Ilona." Her "hello" had so much warmth that I never forgot it. You have vividly brought back that memorable ~ and fateful ~ greeting of so many years ago, with this fine write. Thank you!   Love & Sun Light, Linda  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I ain't no 'she' but hello!! I have always really appreciated your poetic wisdom and talent. I know what you mean by that beautiful hello. I still get the feeling when my daughter drops in....You know what I mean? Enjoyed this thought immensely. Take care Eric |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Karilea, this is absolutely beautiful. You are such an inspiration to me. |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
I am reading this for the first time in the late night of my "aside" for quiet meditation alone, and this beautiful poem fills the passing moments with richness. Your art and craft, and the wisdom upon which it is built, is a gift to the appreciative reader. I am becoming a true fan! Thanks, Sunshine (I haven't come to call you Karilea yet.  )art |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, totally awesome, dear Karilea! Thank you for bringing it back. No doubt one of my favorites of yours! A keeper! Love and hugs. Margherita |
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turtle Senior Member
since 2009-01-23
Posts 548Harbor |
Hi Sunny, This is a very good poem and I enjoyed the read. As I read though, for some reason, I thought of Whitman's method of breaking lines on there natual pause. This is good though and I see you write well. Much enjoyed turtle [This message has been edited by turtle (02-07-2009 06:43 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hello Karilea.. Sometimes a 'hello' can mean oh so much more. It's as though perhaps you have heard it before, somewhere in time... Heart hugs for this beauty. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Hello can mean so many things dear Karilea, it's the way that it is spoken that denotes friendliness, impatience, inquiry, curiosity or just plain boredom. You wrote it well. Love Lindsay |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Okay. *G* Being a fellow Neil Diamond fan, you KNOW what song I'm now singing... and probably will be singing all day... right? *G* But... aside from the annoying sounds coming from my throat *G*... this is pure delight! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
This is delightful - another one I was certain I had replied to (must have read it the first time on a lightning in-and-out flight into and out of Pip when I should have been doing something else! ). It is so very special and so very Karilea to notice special things about people, that nobody else would, and weaving it into a an enthralling poem, that one reads over and over (that's how I discovered that I didn't reply to it after all!). Owl |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun, I always enjoy your look back moments they are the special times that memories are made of.. |
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americangothic Junior Member
since 2008-11-11
Posts 45 |
I enjoy reading your posts...you have genuine talent and creativity |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Hello Do I need to add??? The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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