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Open Poetry #44

While you sleep

Boshii2
Member

since 2009-02-01

Posts 146

0 posted 2009-02-03 05:08 PM

You never know
That while you sleep
I write my poems across your back
I use both hands to colour in the
Secret parts I keep within
I criss and cross
I turn and toss
Unsettled
Nestled
Now at your feet
You wake and lift me up
And so
The day begins
And you
Never
Know

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2009-02-03 06:16 PM

"You never know
That while you sleep
I write my poems across your back
I use both hands to colour in the
Secret parts I keep within"

wow! loved this

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2009-02-03 06:32 PM

Oh, this is so darn precious!

~ and to think your love doesn't even know what's going on! Perhaps it would be to your advantage if they did know!

Enjoyed!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2009-02-03 07:06 PM

Now we do...James

mein or meree thanhai
Junior Member

since 2009-02-01

Posts 21

4 posted 2009-02-04 04:55 PM

your words cutting my heart.. sharp.
no pain.... but i loss my blood..,
im sleeping..., i lov this delema
lov ur words.... may i keep my head on this warm .....,

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2009-02-04 05:19 PM

Very nice indeed.
Love the perspective.....

Eric

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2009-02-06 11:10 AM

Someone's waking with a smile without quite knowing why... how lucky they are! *S*

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