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2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2009-02-01 11:24 AM

Roads of mists, I only see my feet.
roads of asphalts, I run without ideas,
I only see madmen and urban dreams,
I only meet cut trees, separate friends.

Stony roads, I have the hardened heart,
roads drunk with alcohols, I don’t know what to think,
I only think of escaping from the cemented suburbs,
from feelings truncated by streets from anywhere ;

Roads of solitudes, crossroads are dangerous,
roads of sharings let people unhappy,
the sun offered me a girl to the blue eyes,
now I forget roads, time, loving sorrows.

I believe in my star because I still love you,
I abandon roads to walk with you in the lazy fields,
to walk on the perfumed islands, to walk in the friendship of skies,
I walk with you because I am in love…..

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2009-02-01 01:16 PM

Strange how they can lead us anywhere, anytime when we are head over heals isn't it?

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

2 posted 2009-02-01 01:25 PM

fine imagery ... grand ending!:

"I believe in my star because I still love you,
I abandon roads to walk with you in the lazy fields,
to walk on the perfumed islands, to walk in the friendship of skies,
I walk with you because I am in love… (!)"

much applause for this 'penning'!!

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

3 posted 2009-02-01 02:11 PM

Great write, Yann...kat

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

4 posted 2009-02-01 03:02 PM

Well, yann, this sounds like a lovely valentine at just the right time of year.
                                  Ida

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

5 posted 2009-02-01 04:49 PM

Yo Yann,

This is well thought out and written.

Bobby

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

6 posted 2009-02-02 10:45 AM

Thank you all for your kind comments, this is really nice.

yann

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2009-02-02 11:22 AM

Dear Yann,
this is very beautiful and well written. How love transforms everything!

Love,
Margherita

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

8 posted 2009-02-10 11:34 PM

yann,

I almost feel as if I have walked a bit with you. You have a talent for taking me along on your poetic journies. And love? Well, may you have it forever.

Alison

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

9 posted 2009-02-11 11:43 AM

Yann, this is beautiful. You should give it to her on Valentine's Day!

Owl

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

10 posted 2009-02-11 12:38 PM

nice

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