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Oklahoma Rose
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since 2008-02-28
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Oklahoma USA

0 posted 2009-01-31 08:21 PM


It’s Not Just A Job


This isn’t just a job, you know
My heart is in it, too
Each day I go to care for them
The compassions grew

Whatever the task may be
I do it all out of love
Each one touches the heart of me
It seems I can never do enough

To sit there watching them each day
As they take their last breath
Is often times too hard for me
It’s like some kind of awful test

But, one thing that I know for sure
Where they go, when they leave here
Is bound to be a better place
At least, that is what I always hear

1-31-09


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Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2009-01-31 08:32 PM


Yo dear Oklahoma Rose,

This is a lovely, comforting poem.  That's the spirit Hon, keep up the good work.

Love Bobby

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2009-01-31 11:21 PM


My dear Sweet Sue, I would want someone like you taking care of my loved ones! ~ and me if need be!

Actually, what I would really prefer is to have YOU looking after those I love. It would give me great peace of mind for I'd know that they would be well-cared for! You are genuinely a very loving person and I am proud to call you my friend.

With much love,
Linda

AlexG
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since 2009-01-31
Posts 10

3 posted 2009-01-31 11:27 PM


wow, I can't believe I found a site about poetry with this much activity... I should have found this website years ago... but heres my first reply...

I really liked this poem, I take it that you're a nurse or a doctor... But I could only imagine what it would be like having to watch people die all of the time... You expressed yourself very nicely, great poem...

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
4 posted 2009-02-01 09:09 AM


Hi Oklahoma Rose - How lucky you are to have a job that has your heart!  Your title caught my eye because my job is just a job and although I have the heart I do not have the skills for something more meaningful.  It's so nice to know that there are people like you in the world.  Yes, keep up the good work!

Helen  

Midnitesun
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Gaia
5 posted 2009-02-01 09:19 AM


The work you do is emotionally charged, and often physically draining. I've only done hospice for three people, and each one was a unique human whose heart touched mine.
You do a job that few can do, Sue. It is never financially compensated adequately for the true level of care you give another in their last moments. Thankfully, the true caregivers aren't in this profession for what a dollar can buy. What the heart gives and receives carries no price tag.

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia
6 posted 2009-02-01 10:18 AM


Beautiful and caring Sue , my son works in an nursing home and yes he is very compassionate and his heart is in his job


Hope

amusemi
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since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262
A State of Disarray
7 posted 2009-02-01 02:31 PM


A beautiful, heart rending write on a topic we tend to not want to think about while we are going about our daily lives.  I could not do what you do, but I am grateful to know that there are those out there who can. You are an angel.  May you have the strength physically, mentally and especially emotionally to continue blessing people with your kind and gentle heart....kat
Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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highways, & byways, for now
8 posted 2009-02-01 04:54 PM


Oklahoma Rose - I read compassion in this poem, a special person you are...

BC

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
9 posted 2009-02-02 08:39 AM


Its never 'just a job'
when someone like you shows such a wonderful heart

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
10 posted 2009-02-02 12:10 PM


Again, dear Sue, I admire your generous heart through your touching words. You are a true blessing for the ones in your care.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

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