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Street Poet
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0 posted 2009-01-31 01:34 AM


"The Avenue"

...And I don't need you to say you love me if you really don't
Because I love you anyway
These are my thoughts as I drive down the avenue

I always see you in my mind
I get a feeling in heart when I think about you
Love doesn't know what time is

I'm just a man with nothing in my pockets
A lot on my brain
And a umbrella just incase it rains
Brainstorms about love can cause bad weather

I see lovers walking down the street
Wondering if that could be you and me
How soon is too soon
Shall I wait a year
Or until the next full moon

When the feeling is real
Why wait?
I don't need anybody or any  length of time to cosign how I feel
Because I'm going to feel what I feel either way

But…

I don't need you to say you love me if you really don't
Because I love you anyway
These are my thoughts as I drive down the avenue


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Anniepimm
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since 2008-12-26
Posts 550
England
1 posted 2009-01-31 05:39 AM


This stanza is so true, excellent framework on words wonderful poem
Thank you for sharing

quote:
I always see you in my mind
I get a feeling in heart when I think about you
Love doesn't know what time is

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