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Lisa Teller
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since 2009-01-27
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0 posted 2009-01-28 11:18 PM



Cruel Lover Sonnet.
My love for you has no limit
My love for you, beyond thoughts compare,
to a day most sunny and fair.
My life empty without you in it

The touch of your lips to mine,
my dancing heart skips rythym, and beat
Your silent words spoken, speak of deceit
My love for you the unpunishable crime.

And so I must suffer, torment alone
My own prison, your heart its home.
Until I lay cradled in loves’ desire
fanning the flames that feed the fire
Shall I die unquenched, to love another?
What fate shall I suffer cruel lover?


Hi ,Michael,Nan,and Ron,
Just wanted to say hi to some old friends from passions with my first post. Haven't posted in forever. Had to rejoin system didnt recognise me as Lia Fail.Miss this place. Feel like im back with old friends so much talent in these walls.
love
lisa-Lia Fail

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1 posted 2009-01-29 04:37 PM


Welcome, Lisa/Lia... or welcome BACK. *S*

The forums are a bit quieter than usual... the death of Marge Tindal has made for many a heavy heart.

But I'm glad you're back and look forward to reading more of your work!

Suncleaver
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since 2009-01-18
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Stafford England
2 posted 2009-01-29 05:36 PM


This is lovely.

And hi, I'm new but I'd like to welcome you back as well.

With love, Luke.

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2009-01-29 05:54 PM


Lisa, welcome home!
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2009-01-29 06:11 PM


Enjoyed...James
Lisa Teller
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since 2009-01-27
Posts 11
usa
5 posted 2009-01-30 08:39 AM


thankyou for your thoughts i remember marge.
I am sorry to hear of her passing my condolences to everyone she touched.I have been around since 1999 so i am very aware of how involved she was with passions.

lisa teller aka(Lia Fail)

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Realms of Light
6 posted 2009-01-30 12:12 PM


Welcome back to our family circle of friends!
You're one of the original members of ten years ago! I have now been a member for 6 1/2 years, and in some ways I still feel like a 'Newbie'! lol I keep learning and growing ~ and enjoying!

Enjoyed your sonnet! Which brings to mind, how much I miss our resident sonneteer, Seymoour Tabin!

Giving you a warm, welcome-back hug,

Linda


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