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CrazyHorse
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since 2008-08-23
Posts 31
New-Brunswick, Canada

0 posted 2009-01-28 10:42 PM


Appartment airwaves freeze like electricity
On the heels of shadows etched across her face
Your words melt off like posh poetry
Rolling off your tongue as she unfolds her knitted page

The device of love's crutch shuffles down
It ain't easy, but you still get around
You remember your mum's words, yeah, they all rhymed with that same muffled sound

The machines of spoken imagery
Lash out from the furnace of your throat
Stuttering "S-s-s-something out of n-n-n-othing
Won't m-milk words n-n-ow cor-r-r-ode"

Winter's cigarette smoked fingers
Lay knotted fold across her breasts
You pace about nervously, advertising small talk in between her wheezing breaths
And with shifting eyelids, a nicotine tainted thumb motions the wall to the left

Where beaded drapes sag like some velvet cage
She urges "Pull 'em down!" in spite of your age
Your advertisements fail, pitching words white as hail as your confidence exhales

The ghost of productivity
Ho-heaves at the expense of its pay
Repeating "Something out of nothing
Has been known to shave the Night right off the Day"

Four corners loath each other posthumously
They salivate at the thought of love's doing
'Cause one corner can't be accounted for
If three others can't see passed their own ruin

Though I'd love to see the sun's prism exceed
Self-rightousness, it seems
A country man's effort of dreams can't be harvested unless seen

The smokestacks reach out like greedy golem hands
Oh! why won't they reach out for me?
When I asked they pondered "Can a man take something out of nothing
Without adjusting his or her respective scene?"

The spaniard sun's citrus molten reveries
Drop down to the northern-most bowls of her skull
You take in every heat covered speck of light
Like a sea of fire cradles the Sun's wind colored gulls

Her reflection of flesh and bone meet you at the bottom of the stairs
She bleeds out liquid mirror shards, she uses the night sky to dye her hair
She mutters to herself, your thoughts and hers you'd love to compare

But, oh, the autoharp opera singers wail:
"The skeleton key is a nail!"
And ain't it something to see nothing
Mend two hearts with that one rusty nail

[This message has been edited by CrazyHorse (01-29-2009 05:53 AM).]

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amusemi
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since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262
A State of Disarray
1 posted 2009-01-28 11:01 PM


I am fascinated by this and would love to know the tale behind it...interesting write.
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