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The Whisperings...for Marge
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The Whisperings...for Marge |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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In the deepest recesses of my thoughts alone I listen carefully to all soft tones Of ancient laughter, sobs and cheers Stillness of voices I silently hear. I recognize family, mother, father, friend Some make me smile, some I don’t comprehend Even today, after years of what was once heard Their chatter takes on the twittering of birds. But in the darkness, in moonlight soft and quiet The Whisperings present a tumultuous riot. Wondering faintly, is this my conscience speaking Or the sound of angels’ wings, as they are peeking? I know these Angels are around, I feel them in my heart Whispering quiet and low, soft, and never sharp Asking one another if they have guided me right Gently beseeching Him to keep me in his light. Children know their Angels’ Whispers, but forget them as they grow That the Angels will keep them in their glow, Whether troubled, happy, or seemingly ruined in kind Nevertheless, angels stay, whispering hope to their minds. Is it “Conscience” or Angels’ Whispers, do you think? Which would give you comforting smiles? I think it is my Father’s voice in guise of an angel, Taking care of me all this while. So keep Whispering on, my Angels dear And guide me with your thoughts of care Knowing that you trust me to step throughout My Father’s world, and his creations dear. Amen |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Karilea, your comforting whisperings, are sure to be heard and appreciated by our beloved angel, Marge. Love & God's Angel Light, Linda |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Karilea... this is a beautiful gifting for our dear sweet Marge... thank you xx  RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A beautiful whisper...one our Marge will hear as it circles the four winds, and ascends into the universal arms of eternity. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
We all are eventually just a whisper, or a song yet to be sung. Here's to many a Marge moon. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
She was very special, your words tribute this nice lady most eloquently |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Love your "whisperings" Karilea. Marge would love them too. Ida |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
very nice  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Dear SIL, I will listen for Angel Marge's whispers....I am sure we will hear them. Beautiful tribute......love you, jo |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Awwww Karilea, this is so beautiful! I will miss Marge, so much. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
an especially lovely tribute from an especially lovely soul...thank you for sharing...you can tell your heart is in this... |
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Marcia Miller-Twiford Junior Member
since 2008-06-06
Posts 26California, USA |
So very, very beautiful. I have five pages of Marge's poems on my website and "whispering" is a word she used. It seems fitting, a whisper is soft and so was her way. The world was better for having had her and is less for having lost her. But this is life. We are born to die and knowing Marge she did it with great dignity, just as she lived, so did she leave Marcia Miller-Twiford |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
What can one add to all of the above? You wrote a beautiful poem for Marge. i appreciate it and you, "late" [This message has been edited by latearrival (01-30-2009 12:06 AM).] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
How exquisite are your thoughts and your writing, befitting our dearest of hearts, our beloved MArge. Thank you Liz |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
I know Marge will keep on whispering and will be guiding us along our path of poetry. During and after life, she'll always be the Angel we knew she was. And you wrote our thoughts down in beautiful words. Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Beautifully soft thoughts, Karilea. Having once been called MMoonchild, Marge an I have had a special moon connection over the years~~ Her kindness will remain with me always. M |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
A lovely tribute for a beautiful person. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marge gave a lot to PiP...she was a very special person who will live long in our memories. This poem was one of the very first poems I wrote when I first came to this site.... It just seemed to fit this time. Thank you all. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Karalea, what a beautiful tribute to a beautiful lady, you wrote it so well. Take care my friend. Love Lindsay |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Karilea, this is a beautiful poem from one beautiful soul to another. Owl |
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