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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2008-12-31 07:49 AM


we talked about the love town sometimes
like it was a place we had both been
like disneyland or rincon
or somewhere else at another time

I knew your eyes knew my glances
and you wore your dark glasses too
so you wouldn't get caught if you looked
and saw me looking for even more

it seemed quite leisurely for you
to recline with ankles crossed over easy
reciting the proper wife chantings
like you had really read all of the books

and that your woman places were stone now
pleased to be statuary without sensations
seldom used except on special occasions
for inaugurations and graduations

and moments when we were alone in our thoughts
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daark

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1slick_lady
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1 posted 2008-12-31 10:15 AM


"and that your woman places were stone now
pleased to be statuary without sensations
seldom used except on special occasions
for inaugurations and graduations

and moments when we were alone in our thoughts"

what can i say?
moments
just moments

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2008-12-31 10:29 AM


ms slick..moments are lovely when you wear them that way..have a laughing new year babe!!
suthern
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3 posted 2008-12-31 10:40 AM


and you wore your dark glasses too
so you wouldn't get caught if you looked
and saw me looking for even more

I especially like these lines... everything is tantalizing, tempting - and statuary isn't even a consideration. *S*

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2008-12-31 12:52 PM


ms suthern...thanks lady!!  I enjoy your comments, be well in 09'
Indigo
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5 posted 2008-12-31 03:19 PM


the rent was crazy
but love town was palm springs hot
in leather and chrome.

Indigo

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2008-12-31 04:27 PM


ms indi..

castles are always high rent
but then again the knights are longer
they say..thanks babe

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
7 posted 2008-12-31 05:04 PM


Dark Stranger - I do like your writings, so much in the words and to contemplate...

BC

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
8 posted 2008-12-31 05:43 PM


and moments when we were alone in our thoughts~~


Happy New Year, D


M

Margherita
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9 posted 2008-12-31 05:48 PM


You, dear D., always bring us the gift of lovely moments with your awesome poems.

Happy New Year and plenty of love tinged heavenly moments.

Love,
Margherita ... ten minutes to midnight! Getting ready for the champagne moment ...


Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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10 posted 2008-12-31 09:14 PM


love this Mr Daark.... Happy New Year to you!

RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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11 posted 2009-01-01 06:13 AM


BC, most humble thanks guy


_______________

ms MMs, happy new year lady, enjoy 09 like it was a new dress

____________

ms mar, thanks special lady for the eyes and always the smiles


_______________

ms r&b, thanks ms, be blessed in this new season

Richy
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12 posted 2009-01-01 12:21 PM


Dear poet, I know of this feeling quite well.

Your heartfelt wisdom is much enjoyed.

Merry New Year!

Alison
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13 posted 2009-01-01 08:00 PM


Can you sign me up on your list of fans?  Do I get a pin or Dark Stranger sunglasses or maybe a signed picture of your car?

Love this one as I love all of them.

A

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