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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2008-12-27 07:54 PM


             Aftermath

Following in the footsteps
of a passing Winter snow
the tentative moon reappears
to sail the deep oceans of
  endless Time.

Spreading  stillness slips along
this white, soft-velvet forest way,
calming the restless mind
and filling the empty heart
with Nature’s boundless grace
  and spirit.



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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2008-12-27 07:56 PM


again Bruce.. you have captivated me... 'sigh' just so beautiful!  

love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

threadbear
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2 posted 2008-12-27 07:59 PM


You write, with natural grace,
all things taken for granted
but shouldn't be.
Jeff

Oklahoma Rose
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3 posted 2008-12-27 10:43 PM


Beautiful!
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4 posted 2008-12-28 04:10 AM


Bruce,

Sometimes, I feel like I am seeing out your window - the world you see has so much beauty.  I really enjoy the pictures of your poetry.

Alison

Margherita
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5 posted 2008-12-28 05:22 AM


quote:
Spreading  stillness slips along
this white, soft-velvet forest way,
calming the restless mind
and filling the empty heart
with Nature’s boundless grace
  and spirit.



This is exactly what I long for ...

Wonderful write, dear Bruce!

Love,
Margherita

Anniepimm
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6 posted 2008-12-28 06:41 AM


Beautiful! you can almost feel the freedom of the Wind
nakdthoughts
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7 posted 2008-12-28 08:57 AM


If only all  Winter nights could feel like this~

M

YoungatHeart2
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8 posted 2008-12-29 07:04 PM


so peaceful....so still....a picture taken so many times in my mind...stored from my childhood memory

[This message has been edited by YoungatHeart2 (12-29-2008 11:05 PM).]

Marchmadness
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9 posted 2008-12-29 09:49 PM


I love the feel of nature's boundless grace and spirit as only you describe it, Bruce.
                                      Ida

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