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Nothing Left
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England 
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Nothing Left I have walked upon this earth for thousands of years and have evolved to the being I am today I have left no stone unturned and I have tried to better myself; in a way, From the day that I was created and still I have not learned I do not walk alone on this earth and my passage; I have earned, I share this earth with creatures I have met and through my selfishness I have seen Over the wilderness that I have trod and robed the earth of it's beauty, green, I have torn down the creations of nature Ripped the heart out of the earth until death But I still continue to falter Until there is nothing left Annie. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
When there's nothing left? What you've got there is a hole, just waiting for a seed of possibility. (I know. I almost made myself wretch.) It just happens to be true, though. Good luck lovie.  |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Not quite sure what your saying there my dear, but thanks anyway |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I just think holes are under-rated. (But I'm fron N'awlins, so that's only natural I would think that.  )It's in scripture too, though. You can't fill a vessel already filled. So when something seems hopeless and empty (including our lives and spirit) we should anticipate, yes? See? You made me think of all of that! A good thing, I think! |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
there are no holes mentioned in the poem it is about the journey of man and the destruction that some have caused by ignorance but isn't that the way most learn by making mistakes |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I apologize if I took an interpretation not intended. It won't happen again. mea culpa *peace* "Nothing Left" implied a "hole" (meaning something to be filled) to my meager mind's interpretation. I meant no insult. I apologize. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I sure hope mankind gets it right before it's too late. A very note-worthy poem! Well said!  Linda |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
serenity blaze it's OK with my limited view on words it is probably my fault that i don't understand, my ability to grasp the meanings of things dont always make sense to me being disalexic i don't always know what others are saying..sorry..  |
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