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Open Poetry #44

The World Of Dreaming

Anniepimm
Senior Member

since 2008-12-26

Posts 550
England

0 posted 2008-12-31 05:54 AM

The World Of Dreaming,

I close my eyes and drift in the ether of the intertwining worlds
I go quiet and my body relaxes into the state of calm,
Deeper and deeper into that which we call sleep,
Hoping to enter the strange world of dreams,

Floating in a world were there are no restrictions,
No doubts or apprehensions,
A world of possibilities where all are wildest thoughts,
Can be lived and realized,

To the unconscious mind it is real,
The usual and the strange are one in the same,
We except this world of strange normality,
Where dreams and desires are real..

With reluctance we awake,
To a brand new day,
And take on all the cares and realities of life,
Awaiting the night and the wonders of,
The World Of Dreams,

Annie,
21-8-2008

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2008-12-31 01:18 PM

Yo dear Annie,

I'd strive for more simplicity.

Love Bobby

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2008-12-31 04:59 PM

Anniepimm - I almost missed this writing, and are glad I didn't. Excellent writing, and enjoyed reading...

BC

Anniepimm
Senior Member

since 2008-12-26

Posts 550
England

3 posted 2009-01-01 05:21 AM

Thank you for your feed back it is much appreciated...

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