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HopeS
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0 posted 2009-01-19 05:19 AM






Loving Dreams Transpired

Those times wishful thinking
Our minds would pursue
Both having shared dreams
As our imagination grew

With the keys to imagination
We became two of a kind
Where our wishes revealed
Thoughts from our mind

We conveyed shore to shore
In like minded imagination
While creative juices flowed
To our dream destination

As loving dreams transpired
Upon the flights of fantasy
Imagination travelled where
Our minds wanted to be


HopeĀ©2009

© Copyright 2009 HopeS - All Rights Reserved
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2009-01-19 06:09 AM


Hope.. you always know how to bring forth a smile..   thank you, this is just what I needed this evening... a most wonderful penning..

love
RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

HopeS
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2 posted 2009-01-19 06:11 AM


Thank you Roniece for you kind reply and sharing smiles across the miles

Hope

Richy
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3 posted 2009-01-19 01:03 PM



Dear Hope, this was so amazing, how many times I've felt these exact feelings.

Wonderful!
Richy

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
4 posted 2009-01-19 07:01 PM


HopeS - at times those dreams do come true. Nice write with graphics...

BC

steavenr
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5 posted 2009-01-19 10:44 PM


this is just beautiful, and I feel like each stanza supports each other so well...it is good all the way through...long and sustained applause while standing can be heard for miles and miles...yes, into the sunset, and through the imagination...lovely craftsmanship...nice write
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