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Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
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0 posted 2009-01-18 02:07 PM



Indefinites

I love you more
than words can tell,
but, even though
my words may fail,
I write them down
till they avail
a portion of my heart,
perhaps, a vital part,
but, still, each part
does fade, does rob the whole
of something formed
within my soul
that amplifies,
that screams, extols
expressions of my praise
for you, your ways,
your haze,
your keeping me
in awe for days
while dreaming of your lips, your gaze
that hang upon my mind,
but find
the segments of my thoughts, entwined,
do only more describe, define
emotions, without words of mine,
to open and explore,

“I've loved you even more.”



Lighthouse Bob

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2009-01-18 02:15 PM


Dear Bob, what a lovely surprise to find you in Open and with such a wonderful write, unraveling your heart in love. It is very intense, yet refined and delicate. Words that go straight to the core of feelings, the center of the heart.

Love,
Margherita

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2009-01-18 03:59 PM


Bob!!! What a pleasant surprise to see you posting in Open! It's been awhile!

~ A tender spill of love emotions from your spirit heart. Beautifully penned.


EA


amusemi
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since 2001-12-08
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A State of Disarray
3 posted 2009-01-18 10:10 PM


Wonderful!!!!
Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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highways, & byways, for now
4 posted 2009-01-18 10:46 PM


Lighthousebob - a soft touching romantic write, well done...

BC

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
5 posted 2009-01-19 12:13 PM


Thank you, thank you Everyone for your warm Welcomes and your kind responses. They're all very very much appreciated.

God bless,

-Bob

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