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Attic Eyes
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Attic Eyes |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india 
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Attic eyes ==================== A pensive eagle flies in the ethereal space. The encyclopedia salesman crawls down the road with his paralyzed cheery face. A note of distant bell is taking the shape of a girl’s tress. These are the scenes he has seen, he knows. Yes, this attic knows them all. This attic sees them all. His boyish eyes have seen the golden brown leaves flying before they fall upon a road. The lonesome kite is losing a fight with the reversing wind. The once-pink house at the other side of the road and spinster who lives there forever with a cynic thirst for some vague things. The boy at the attic of course knows them closely, like the creaky floor where he lives, like the pair of crutches by the bed. © 2008 - All Rights Reserved Kushal Poddar clever talks delay friendship! |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
This is quite sad, it painted a picture of the lonely boy staring out the window at the world excellent imagery and good poem..  |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
wonderful, wonderful Kushal loved this! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You are so talented, dear Ku! Besides exceptional poetry, I could see you writing wonderful scripts. You are so visual. Wonderful, in its sadness. Love and hugs. Margherita  "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This is very touching, Ku. You have a great talent. Ida |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Poddarku, It's good you know the boy in the attic. He needs friends. The poem works well. Bobby |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
What Bobby said. How I wish that I could wave a magic wand and give him lots of real live friends and smiles and laughter and fun. Owl |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi Ku!  Another visual treat for our eyes ~ as seen through attic eyes, in this, another fine piece of writing. You are a poet with excellent powers of observation, visualizations, sensitivity, and empathy. ~ Plus a wholelotta talent! Warm hug, Linda |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
I really like this...especially how well the title works...very nicely done |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Bumping this excellent poem up again. Owl |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
Loved this and how well tha title fits. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
poddarku - much to be seen from an attic window, very nice write... BC |
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