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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2009-01-16 11:50 AM






You Found A Friend In Me

You see a heart full of love
Each time you take a look
With many thoughts of you
You read me like a book

Nothing that I need to hide
As you look a little deeper
Viewing beyond the cover
You knew I was a keeper

On throughout those years
So much I shared with you
Every moment I cherished
You know this to be true

Knowing the heart of mine
Sincerity you came to see
Assurence in which I gave
You found a friend in me

HopeĀ©2009

© Copyright 2009 HopeS - All Rights Reserved
Heart Shots
Junior Member
since 2009-01-16
Posts 11

1 posted 2009-01-16 11:56 AM


This is a wonderfully sweet poem. I loved it! It is a gift to find such a precious friend and treasure! Great job!
Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
2 posted 2009-01-16 12:15 PM


Yo dear HopeS,

You're my sweetheart, but you know that.

This is a very effectice poem.  I like it a lot.

Love Bobby

poddarku
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since 2008-01-15
Posts 589
india
3 posted 2009-01-17 01:26 AM


"Viewing beyond the cover
You knew I was a keeper"
This poetry is a keeper too.

clever talks delay friendship!

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
4 posted 2009-01-17 09:00 AM


To read you, dear Hope, is always a refreshing experience.

Beautiful. Talking about freshness ... I do hope the tremendous heat will soon pass!

Love,
Margherita

ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
5 posted 2009-01-17 01:38 PM


Beautiful closeness expressed in this Hope.

The love that grows that's the one everyone should experience.

Eric

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
6 posted 2009-01-17 06:00 PM


High Hope!

When I read the title of your poem, I thought to myself, yeppers, you'd be a good friend, to be sure! You are gentle, sweet, and loving.

A precious poem of friendship from a precious poetess.


Linda

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
7 posted 2009-01-18 12:18 PM


wonderful dear Hope!! xx

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

8 posted 2009-01-18 12:23 PM


wow...simply wow!!!  this is beautiful...
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