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serquelia
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since 2009-05-27
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Pennsylvania

0 posted 2009-05-27 03:33 PM



Making a way along on a path,
as I go where to see a beautiful rainbow.

Such a dewy day
that I may say
"Oh!" which way may my horse go
to get to the end of such a show
of colorful bright mixture
that is of no texture.

Lasting not long
but as I ride along,
there are wild horses running free.

Somewhere Indians are hollering,
riding as if on a rampage
of a fit of rage
because they had seen me.

I thought I was on forbidden land
and they would chain me to a tree,
wrong as I was
of course they wanted my horse.

Of all the other wild horses running free,
why in the world would they take mine?
Maybe I looked looked so innocent
as they thought,
and your so right
I didnt put up a fight.

Walking along with racing thoughts,
I looked up saw a horse coming my way
to my dismay its galloping towards me.
As it comes along
I hop right on
and thank the Lord
for bringing me a horse
on such a long journey.


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1 posted 2009-05-28 11:49 AM


Oh, do I have a friend who is going to enjoy this...

two friends, actually!

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2 posted 2009-05-28 12:05 PM


Thank you for emailing me the link, Karilea.  Thank you Serquelia for your lovely poem.  You obviously love horses, and I do too, especially my late, wonderful horse Flicka.  He was 37½ years old when he went to Heaven where he has been now for 7 years and 1 month today.  He was/is the love of my life and the most wonderful horse who ever was born.  

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Gaia
3 posted 2009-05-29 09:13 PM


Welcome, Serquelia.
Wild running horses are a beautiful sight.
Your poem shows you ride with the spirit of the horse.

Bill Charles
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4 posted 2009-05-30 12:27 PM


serquelia - this is a very nice writing. It would go well with a photo of wild horses running through the hills...

BC

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