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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2009-05-18 08:40 AM

feeling the ribs of a seven up can
then pressing the breath out
feeling the exhale scent of citrus
and chilled sweet sticky blood I guess

or whatever lives in metal body acquaintances

as I stand on tree trunk circumferences
they do feel larger then my arms
and they are larger then others I have known
when women reached around me and left love

or whatever lives in woman body acquaintances

there are cars going bi, as I have heard them
when their wheels of rubber on asphalt moan
on the corners as if they are doing things to them
differently then when they are rolling straight air

or whatever lives in rubber walled acquaintances

a stranger wonders why I close my eyes this way
to feel the second hand breath she pretends with
on my fingers like it was some dampened cloud
at the top of the mountain where the steps end

or whatever lives in heaven soiled acquaintances

______________

daark..

(just playing with senses and objects with my eyes closed so I can keep my government job when I am dead..)

SlowlyFallAway
Member

since 2008-08-29

Posts 279
North Carolina

1 posted 2009-05-18 08:48 AM

"there are cars going bi, as I have heard them
when their wheels of rubber on asphalt moan
on the corners as if they are doing things to them
differently then when they are rolling straight air"

awesome visual

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2009-05-18 09:59 AM

thanks my friend!!

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

3 posted 2009-05-18 10:33 AM

When I close my eyes to type - like this ... see no hands, I mean eyes! Okay, I cheated with the exclamation point. Anyway, when I close my eyes right now, I breathe. I feel the air as I absorb your poetry. And, the keysboard makes such a comforting sound as I tease the keys. Behind my eyes I see a string and, oh my God, it's attached to a 47 Henley. Who woulda thoght.

Thanks D,
A

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2009-05-18 12:25 PM

Ali-san..you found a 47 Henway? oh I get it, only when your eyes are closed..watch for the chicken feet they will leave prints on your oatmeal.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

5 posted 2009-05-19 12:44 PM

Until I read Alison's response, I didn't even realize I'd closed my eyes and inhaled deeply... your words do that to me... make me lose time and not fret the loss as I savor the gain. *S*

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