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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2009-01-12 11:49 AM

some nowaday window turning pages
like a shopping lovecery store
in line for express less than items
not frozen hopefully, partially thawed

or squeezed too often, but perhaps some
so the ripeness is not some secret
that has to be discovered more slowly
then the aging process of whine

turning to the lovely of moan songs
and double parking in the dirt lots
so we can find out way back out again
after we reveal our coupons true value

and just exchange them without redemption
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daark

r v wooo
Senior Member

since 2007-08-07

Posts 656

1 posted 2009-01-12 12:29 PM

daark, always enjoy the daark thoughts.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2009-01-12 12:57 PM

rv..thanks for the review!!

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

3 posted 2009-01-12 03:49 PM

ohhhhhhhh shopping
one of my fav things to do
giggle

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2009-01-12 04:12 PM

oh shop it! (grin) thanks babe

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

5 posted 2009-01-12 05:55 PM

yes, I like this one Mr Daark

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

nebulous_nymph
Junior Member

since 2008-03-02

Posts 37
Inertia

6 posted 2009-01-12 06:37 PM

so many coupons.....
so little time
loved this....love em all

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

7 posted 2009-01-12 07:22 PM

I gotta get the address to this store, I'm getting low on loveceries my own self!

I think I'm gonna need a bigger cart though!

Great stuff here Daark!

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2009-01-13 05:59 AM

ms r&b...thanks babe

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ms nymph..thank you for the slow smile

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richy, thanks guy!!

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

9 posted 2009-02-01 05:06 PM

I don't know anyone who plays with words quite like you do, D. You use them in the most beautiful and interesting ways.

Alison

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

10 posted 2009-02-01 11:38 PM

nice...love the metaphorical qualities of:

"after we reveal our coupons true value

and just exchange them without redemption"

...has more layers than a spring onion... liked it

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

11 posted 2009-02-02 06:17 AM

ms ali-san..thanks babe

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steavenr..humble thanks from the pages of a head of lettuce..(grin)

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