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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2009-05-10 09:54 PM



On the up side
of down, a triology
of daffodils, trinkets
of sea bringings,
nautical treasures in
surround of forsynthias

notes of lost dreamweavers
and once beloved mystics
that hide in the draws
of nostaligia

when down becomes up
and we swing without
mirrors

once that the winds
lose their northern
composure


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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
1 posted 2009-05-10 11:19 PM


I am always intrigued by your caring more or less poetry.
Because to me, it's all there, the more and less in equal measures.

This is so fancy and free, talk about a breath of fresh air!!!
a la good goddess!!  

Kaoru
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since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow
2 posted 2009-05-10 11:33 PM


I agree with Blue. It's so refreshing and cool. Making me feel like I'm there.
Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
3 posted 2009-05-11 12:29 PM


inkedgoddess - excellent as always, you do write well...

BC

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT
4 posted 2009-05-11 01:36 PM


Crisp, as always!  : )
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