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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2009-01-12 02:42 AM




Love From Me To You

Its those thoughts of you
As I am writing today
I do care so much more
Than my words can say

Still it is through my pen
Where I try to provide
In words of love flowing
From the feelings inside

It was from the first hello
To loving you no less
My feelings continue on
From my heart I express

The love from me to you
Words I often impart
So special you became
In writings from my heart


HopeĀ©2009



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Anniepimm
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since 2008-12-26
Posts 550
England
1 posted 2009-01-12 04:07 AM


Oh this is so beautiful,
You can feel the love in this poem,
Thank you for sharing the wonderful feeling i get from this piece

Excellently written...

ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
2 posted 2009-01-12 04:38 AM


You might not think your words can express the love exactly but you can certainly set the proper mood with them..
Lovely writing and I love that concluding line. Could be a title for another poem.

Take care

Eric

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
3 posted 2009-01-12 06:32 AM


just beautiful lovely Hope.... just beautiful!

RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
4 posted 2009-01-12 11:10 AM


You have such an elegant way to express your feelings, dear Hope!

Very beautiful!

Love,
Margherita

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