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Alison
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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

0 posted 2009-01-11 09:49 PM




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Robert E. Jordan
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1 posted 2009-01-11 09:57 PM


Yo dear Alison,

It looks like a knock-down-drag-out fight in the bird feeder.

Nice work on this poem.

Love Bobby

ethome
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2 posted 2009-01-11 10:06 PM


Isn't it amazing how those feathers will keep those few little ounces of flying courage warm and they seem so happy.

This is really cute. Maybe that guy birdie is trying to pick up a little girl birdie so he can be even warmer.
Take care and keep nature's beauty coming at us.

Eric

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2009-01-12 06:34 AM


oh Ali-girl.. great pic, and beautiful words to go with it.... love this to bits!   RDB

and yes, I am feeling well again and back to my bubbly self...thank you for your concern.. xxxxx

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Margherita
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4 posted 2009-01-12 11:07 AM


That's the way they keep warm, I guess! Wonderful, awesome picture and such lovely words from you, dear Alison.

I see only harmony in the forms and in the color.

Love,
Margherita

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5 posted 2009-01-12 11:20 AM


Oh! Oh! Oh! Oh! OH! I don't know what to say, Alison - except that the book I emailed you HAS to happen and HAS to contain this (please).  I loved the replies especially Ethome's and Margherita's.  And I read the bickering as verrrrrrrrrry friendly bickering.  

Owl

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6 posted 2009-01-12 11:40 AM


ms ali-san

give em the bird huh?  coolcute ms

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7 posted 2009-01-12 12:26 PM


You have certainly mastered the haiku, Alison. Love this.
                                   Ida

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8 posted 2009-01-12 06:06 PM



Yeah isn't it always like that, everytime you get ready to chat up a bird, some other cocky little rooster has to come over and stick his beak into your business lol.

Yeah... Get Outta My Air, Face!
That pretty much sums it up right good.

Nice one Alison!




Alison
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9 posted 2009-02-01 05:04 PM


Thank you all. They are piggy and resourceful little birdies!

xoxoxo
Alison

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