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For All The Poet Ladies Here (repost) |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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The Lady Of My Soul From deep within her bright eyes and in her sultry laugh come tender soul vibrations where spells of love are cast. With graceful taste and wisdom through strife or peace and hope there lives my sweet enchantress The lady of my soul. Her rare and mystic mindset a lighthouse for the truth sends passionate love beacons to the sea of stranded youth With words of gathered knowledge Inwoven in her speech with mercy and true vision she speaks of faith in leaps. Her look is deep with dreaming of a love that cancels tears. Her eyes are filled with wonder and unpermitted fears. For she's come down from heaven and all the lives she passed are vehicles of purpose that wait to bring her back. And when her needed tableaux protects her special doves with teeming flair and purpose she triumphs in her love. In calm she waits out worry when time for changing grows and there's no other mortal more patient with her own. Deep in the heart of my soul lies the jewell of her worth. where destiny has brought her to deal with love or hurt. In bold and sudden fashion she rises from the fold to state her love with spirit the lady of my soul. She knows dry eyes are hiding the feelings in this man. while sweetness of her merit within my pulse expands. Her armor or her softness both stir my mind like fire no quick reluctant purpose can quell my deep desire. With cheer and expectation and time for all things born she heartens the disheartened and comforts the forlorn. She's gentle and all-seeing and mirrors her repose with love for curing sadness the lady of my soul. Her words are wonderous music that warm like winds of spring. And her faith is like the twilight the end of day can bring. Her senusous naked valleys where sensation stirs my bones are places where I take the finest journey home. And year by year she's gifted with the will to share her source Her love of future scanning the path of evermore. And back from all life's setbacks she springs to keep me whole with sorceries of gladness the lady of my soul. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
thanks Eric/ I have been missinf Nancy. Nice treat |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Spoken in the truest sense of loveliness...love. She has a wonder about her that captures the essence of her name perfectly: Enchantress. And such a magical smile. I miss her, too. It's been a long time. Thank from one of the poet ladies.  ~Karen |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I'm sorry I must be missing something. I posted this for all the fine poet ladies here at Passions but don't know who Nancy is or in my old age I can't remember who she is. If this fits her description then that's even better. If you are missing her then I hope it's just because she's not posting here anymore. I want to thank you for your comments TD and Klassy, I appreciate the thoughts even though this poem is a description of the love of my life it was also meant as a tribute to the fine qualities all of you Passions poet ladies express. Thanks Eric |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Eric dear friend , I loved this from beginning to end , it was so touching Hope |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Eric, I think this is one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read~~ It is almost musical and I appreciate your words left for all of us. Thank you~~  M p.s. am saving it, if it's ok, on my desktop ~~just because~~ |
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Osprey Member
since 2009-04-12
Posts 249 |
I have the feeling that,in New Brunswick, there is one very, touched and grateful lady. A fine, poetic tribute to 'the lady of your soul'. And a generous dedication to all the lady posters on this site. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello Ethome, from beginning to ends words grab you and don't let you go...touching homage to all women. regards yann |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Wonderful and captivating write. Wish all men could appreciate the lady of their souls as you do yours - what a wonderful world it would be. Helen |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Eric- This is so enchantingly exquisite! Big hugs for sharing these sigh words (((((( Eric )))))) Heather |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
I wondered. You express with eloquence the essence of adoration and esteem for someone who becomes you. It is very lovely. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hope and Maureen thank you for those kind words. I'm flattered by you doing that Maureen of course you can. Eric |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Osprey That's a beautiful bird and we have many many of them around here. Yes, she is a great gal and we get along very well, grown accustomed to one another quite comfortably. Thank you I appreciate the comments. Eric |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Yann that was the idea as we have many many wonderful heart and soul searching women poets here that are easy to make such statements about. Eric |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You are dear, my friend... Thank you for lifting this poet lady's spirits with your beautiful words and kind thoughts. *S* |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Helen and heather Thank you so much for those kind words and I'm so glad you appreciated it the way it is supposed to be. Eric |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Eric, you are a man who understands and appreciates women ~ be they poetesses or not. Fortunate is she who has captured your heart.  This was exceptionally sweet and sensitive. You True-ly have the heart and soul of a poet.  May all the love that you radiate into this world be returned 10-fold!  Linda |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: The whole poem flows enchantingly down the page, dear Eric. Your soul lady has inspired you so deeply. A pleasure to read. Thank you for dedicating it to us ladies. A lovely gift indeed! Love, Margherita |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You have a gift of the romantic, that which makes each lady feel personally touched, and hopes that your verses describe her. Very lovely dear Eric.  |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Eric, What a gift you have offered the Ladies of PiP. I am in awe of your talent and I appreciate you thinking of us. Beautifully written. Alison |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Her rare and mystic mindset a lighthouse for the truth sends passionate love beacons to the sea of stranded youth Eric my good friend, that is a terrific poem, one of your very best, a delight to read. God bless. Lindsay |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Klassy Thanks for coming back I appreciate your comments very much. Eric Suthern....I like that name, it sounds homey. Thank you for those wonderful comments I appreciate it very much. Eric |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Linda Those are very kind comments and I appreciate them very much coming from a poetess with a heart as warm as yours. vandana thank you for the read and the response. Eric |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Margherita Thank you for the comments and you are so welcome. I appreciate the quote. One of my fav verses too. CELESTE! my dear sweet poet gal. I loves ya to death kid. Thanks for the visit, you know I love to hear from ya. Eric |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Alison My dear poet friend from the beautiful far north. I am pleased that these words warmed your heart. Get yourself ready, the big flies are coming and it's FISHING SEASON! very soon. Love it when I hear from you. Lindsay Good to hear from down under. Always intrigued with your country. So glad you could appreciate this poem as we have so many fine talented ladies in this forum. I am in awe of their creative poetic works. Over and over again I continue to be amazed. Eric |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Eric, your words bring huge smiles to so many ladies...you are truly a romantic man!  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Kacy Thanks so much I sure appreciate the kind words. Eric |
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