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rad802
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0 posted 2009-04-26 08:53 AM


Testing (2009)by Rick Delmonico

Reasons revolve and lightly touched they softly shimmer
Monumental precepts to oasis
Thoughtlessly the will dissolves the tiny fortunes
And returns to darkened alleys, ergo stasis

Hollow impetus ignores the light of dawn
The waking lingers as it blends the last sensations
Now fast forward till the evening stars are drawn
Bleeding out before us, shifting constellations

Some hurt removed the restless pace of silent living
Indulgent injuries becoming less neglected
Blindly lust perfumed anonymous occasions
Preferred but never valued or expected

Weary consciousness exhaust the light of day
The worker struggles till he meets his expectations
Now fast forward till the stars are pushed away
Bleeding out before us, shifting constellations


Rick Delmonico

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nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2009-04-26 09:01 AM


"Weary consciousness exhaust the light of day
The worker struggles till he meets his expectations"

that says it for me

M

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