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HopeS
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0 posted 2009-01-09 08:13 AM




I Cannot Help But Wonder

Thoughts we can never see
Unless we choose to reveal
I cannot help but wonder
How much you conceal

With your continued silence
Thoughts remain a mystery
I cannot help but wonder
Were you thinking of me

Having thoughts on my mind
I am always able to express
I cannot help but wonder
Did you think of me less

Where did your thoughts go
Mine I would always convey
I cannot help but wonder
Have you nothing to say


HopeĀ©2009


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Anniepimm
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1 posted 2009-01-09 08:43 AM


Awww this is beautiful Hope
And one i can identify with,
I have been divorced twice
And no words said are always under question,
Thank you for sharing....

inkedgoddess
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2 posted 2009-01-09 10:41 AM


I wonder too about these mysteries and wish that I didn't wonder at all.
Earth Angel
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3 posted 2009-01-09 10:48 AM


I have often found that if I get my wondering mind out of the way and let my heart do the thinking, I'm much better off! lol

Another lovely penning from you, Dear Hope.

Sending a big, warm hug,
Linda

Paul Wilson
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4 posted 2009-01-09 01:32 PM


Hope...This is some great poetry. Great rhyme and flow. This will leave me to ponder on something that I have been trying to put out of my mind for a long time. Thanks so much for sharing...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

Rick
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5 posted 2009-01-09 04:44 PM


Dear Hope, this is a good question, but one I am sure we all know the answer to, none of us always say what we think, we are all human with strange ideas at times, sharing would seem silly then, I know exactly what you are writing about though, I often keep questions silent to myself for not wanting to answer them truthfully.

Rick

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6 posted 2009-01-09 05:50 PM


liked it
Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2009-01-09 10:38 PM


Hope~
Your writing is ALWAYS so lovely~
We are all full of 'wonder'~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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ethome
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8 posted 2009-01-10 12:07 PM


Very nice Hope.....Makes one wonder when the pieces are missing.....Well written.

Eric

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