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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2009-04-13 05:56 PM

Dreams (Memories)

I will be dreaming of you
Today
I will be wishing on stars tonight
The dreams of you
I dream of you every night
Wishing if this was right
Or wrong
Hoping if these dreams come true
The memories that stayed
Into my heart
Will be alive forever
No matter
If this day doesn't come
I will shut my eyes
Dreams of you tonight
Dreams (memories)
Yet dreams stay alive on my mind
Dreams (memories)

Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

1 posted 2009-04-13 06:26 PM

This is very sweet.

~*Krista Botterill*~

"Creating yourself is a spiritual act." ~ Susan Vreeland

critical mass
Member

since 2009-03-25

Posts 275
Michigan

2 posted 2009-04-13 07:29 PM

nice

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

3 posted 2009-04-13 08:19 PM

Yo dear Vandana,

This is a very nice love poem. I like it.

Dreaming can be very good.

Love Bobby

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2009-04-13 08:27 PM

Hi vandana

Very nice romantic poem.
Dreams can take you places where love is forever.

Good work!

Eric

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

5 posted 2009-04-13 09:30 PM

Sweet dreams are one of the pleasures in life and your dream is a pleasure to you.

and I hope your dream comes true for you Vandana. Take care.

Lindsay

Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

6 posted 2009-04-16 06:18 AM

I agree with Bobby, Vandana. It’s good to dream and even better to work towards it and achieve it. May your dreams come true.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

7 posted 2009-04-16 05:11 PM

sure beats some of the dreams I've been having lately...nice, with an almost mystical quality to it...loved it

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

8 posted 2009-04-16 05:29 PM

I know just how this feels

enjoyed reading you

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

9 posted 2009-04-16 10:56 PM

Yes, Dreams fill up the empty spaces, Vandana.
Ida

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

10 posted 2009-04-20 12:57 PM

The memories that stayed
Into my heart
Will be alive forever

That they do... waking or sleeping. *S* I liked this very much, my friend... beautiful work!

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